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Love it so much!
And so many details to discover! Like the greeting on Duke's letter from Regina, how Yuuta supports his head on his hands and more.
I love, and giggle at Drillboy and Deckerd. Drillboy peeking over the table frame fits his character so well - Deckerd being almost in the same position: <3 He's maybe mentally not as young as Drillboy, but I think he's the second-youngest so for me this is both fitting and adorable. But all are awesome acually, especially how Powerjoe leans in and is looking curious.
The translation is well done. You got the sentence structure down and what little mistakes are there, are mostly in minor syllable divisions and capitalisation. A computer programme would have had problems transforming the Japanese sentence structure into the correct English form. I bow to you for your effort in the translation.